.
Across the bridge of time ExcellentTHIS RUNS A CLOSE SECOND TO
THE MOST BEAUTIFUL PASSAGE'S I'VE EVER READ.THE FIRST BEING IN THE BIBLE ITSELF. THIS WAS JUST LOVELY, IT TOOK MY
BREATH AWAY. T.S.JComment Written 13-Feb-2008 by T.S.J.Read
and reviewed with blinders on. Details
My Dreams Of Home Excellent This is
awe-inspiring--the art is heartfelt, saying beautiful is understating--it grabs at your heart strings and pulls and pulls--the
poetry is deep and pensive, the message never before as needed (in this poet's humble opinion). No errors of any kind;
would definitely have been a 6 starbut I ran out last month!! To read that you do this in stolen time is incredible. Maybe
try for a grant? This kind of talent deserves nurturing fulltime...God bless, shyComment Written 20-Jun-2007 by shy1250The
Secrets Of the Stars Excellent
Very lovely. very lovely rhythm and flow here. Beautifully done, simple and compact,
sweet,tender and vibrant. Enchanting. Thank you for preesenting this poem up for review. Good luck in your writing and your
art, which is enthralling!!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2007 by
weirdcarbon
The Laughter Of the stars Excellent
Now that is quite an image you have spun there with very few
words. Very well done When I read this I feel at peace and rather childlike - it creates serenity if that's possible Nicley
done - no SPAGs or typos Michael
Excellent
Athena,How touching. I loved your poem and your art. It saddens me to think that angels cry but theymust
when they see our world filled with so much blackness as war and hate. We can teach ourchildren to make a difference for the
future and to wipe the tears away from the angel's eyes.You are truly a gifted person.BelleSpirit Comment Written 16-Apr-2007
by BellaSpirit
My Dreams
Excellent
Hi
Athena
Stunning artwork - so much talent.I thought the poem had a childlike effect when I read it and see that the work
is part of your children's book you are writing. I can see with such talent that the poetry comes secondary - buthey,
that's real good too! I think I would tryuly love a copy of your book when published - pleaseet me know. I love children's
poetry and if accopanied by this kind of artwork, I just know I'll loveit. The presentation was a delight to the eye and
to the ear. Saw not a thing amiss. Marion.Comment Written 12-Apr-2007 by marion
Dream Time Excellent
That was a pretty poem. I loved the imagery and it flowed very
well too. It holds this surreal feelto it that works well with the tone of the poem. You can really get into it. Great Job!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2007 by BlackDove
Dream Time
Exceptional
Wow
can we say talent what a beautiful panting and poem to with. I give you 6 stars and I thinkyou deserve it. Beautiful. Trena
Comment Written 07-Apr-2007 by Trena
The
window into today
Excellent
The gift of free form writing
is a precious one and you certainly have that gift. I like the play of
yesterday on today and tomorrow.
Especially like "the whisper of time's memories follow me into
the night.....great line and
great thought... connects nicely with "still I listen for yesterdays
whispers".
Keep on writing....
tazman
Comment Written 01-May-2007
by tazman
Across the bridge of time ExcellentTHIS RUNS A CLOSE SECOND TO
THE MOST BEAUTIFUL PASSAGE'S I'VE EVER READ.THE FIRST BEING IN THE BIBLE ITSELF. THIS WAS JUST LOVELY, IT TOOK MY
BREATH AWAY. T.S.JComment Written 13-Feb-2008 by T.S.J.Read
and reviewed with blinders on. Details
My Dreams Of Home Excellent This is
awe-inspiring--the art is heartfelt, saying beautiful is understating--it grabs at your heart strings and pulls and pulls--the
poetry is deep and pensive, the message never before as needed (in this poet's humble opinion). No errors of any kind;
would definitely have been a 6 starbut I ran out last month!! To read that you do this in stolen time is incredible. Maybe
try for a grant? This kind of talent deserves nurturing fulltime...God bless, shyComment Written 20-Jun-2007 by shy1250The
Secrets Of the Stars Excellent
Very lovely. very lovely rhythm and flow here. Beautifully done, simple and compact,
sweet,tender and vibrant. Enchanting. Thank you for preesenting this poem up for review. Good luck in your writing and your
art, which is enthralling!!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2007 by
weirdcarbon
The Laughter Of the stars Excellent
Now that is quite an image you have spun there with very few
words. Very well done When I read this I feel at peace and rather childlike - it creates serenity if that's possible Nicley
done - no SPAGs or typos Michael
Excellent
Athena,How touching. I loved your poem and your art. It saddens me to think that angels cry but theymust
when they see our world filled with so much blackness as war and hate. We can teach ourchildren to make a difference for the
future and to wipe the tears away from the angel's eyes.You are truly a gifted person.BelleSpirit Comment Written 16-Apr-2007
by BellaSpirit
My Dreams
Excellent
Hi
Athena
Stunning artwork - so much talent.I thought the poem had a childlike effect when I read it and see that the work
is part of your children's book you are writing. I can see with such talent that the poetry comes secondary - buthey,
that's real good too! I think I would tryuly love a copy of your book when published - pleaseet me know. I love children's
poetry and if accopanied by this kind of artwork, I just know I'll loveit. The presentation was a delight to the eye and
to the ear. Saw not a thing amiss. Marion.Comment Written 12-Apr-2007 by marion
Dream Time Excellent
That was a pretty poem. I loved the imagery and it flowed very
well too. It holds this surreal feelto it that works well with the tone of the poem. You can really get into it. Great Job!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2007 by BlackDove
Dream Time
Exceptional
Wow
can we say talent what a beautiful panting and poem to with. I give you 6 stars and I thinkyou deserve it. Beautiful. Trena
Comment Written 07-Apr-2007 by Trena
The
window into today
Excellent
The gift of free form writing
is a precious one and you certainly have that gift. I like the play of
yesterday on today and tomorrow.
Especially like "the whisper of time's memories follow me into
the night.....great line and
great thought... connects nicely with "still I listen for yesterdays
whispers".
Keep on writing....
tazman
Comment Written 01-May-2007
by tazman
BellaSpirit
My Dreams
Excellent
-Jun-2007 by shy1250The
Excellent
Athena,How touching. I loved your poem and your art. It saddens
me to think that angels cry but theymust when they see our world filled with so much blackness as war and hate. We can teach
ourchildren to make a difference for the future and to wipe the tears away from the angel's eyes.You are truly a gifted
person.BelleSpirit Comment Written 16-Apr-2007 by BellaSpirit
My Dreams
Excellent
Dream Time Excellent
That was a pretty poem. I loved the imagery and it flowed very well too. It holds this surreal feelto it that works
well with the tone of the poem. You can really get into it. Great Job! Comment Written 07-Apr-2007 by BlackDove
Dream Time
Exceptional
Wow can we say talent what a beautiful panting and poem to with.
I give you 6 stars and I thinkyou deserve it. Beautiful. Trena Comment Written 07-Apr-2007 by Trena
The window into today
Excellent
The gift of free form writing is a precious one and you certainly have that gift. I like the play of
yesterday on today and tomorrow. Especially like "the whisper of time's memories follow me into
the night.....great line and great thought... connects nicely with "still I listen for yesterdays
whispers". Keep on writing....
tazman
Comment Written 01-May-2007 by tazman
Hi journeytoforever
I don't
know, I picked this up on the 'what next' and thought, the name rings a bell...so checked.As soon as the artwork started
to come across I knew who it was instantly! And to think I nearly missed out! And momentarily forgot your name! Once again,
striking work that appeals to me so much. It captures my soul. I cannot give you a favourite line - I just cannot - they all
are. My six says it all. Marion.
Across the bridge of time
ExcellentTHIS RUNS A CLOSE SECOND TO THE MOST BEAUTIFUL PASSAGE'S I'VE EVER READ.THE FIRST BEING
IN THE BIBLE ITSELF. THIS WAS JUST LOVELY, IT TOOK MY BREATH AWAY. T.S.JComment Written 13-Feb-2008 by T.S.J.Read and reviewed with blinders on. Details
My
Dreams Of Home Excellent This is awe-inspiring--the art is heartfelt, saying beautiful is understating--it
grabs at your heart strings and pulls and pulls--the poetry is deep and pensive, the message never before as needed (in this
poet's humble opinion). No errors of any kind; would definitely have been a 6 starbut I ran out last month!! To read that
you do this in stolen time is incredible. Maybe try for a grant? This kind of talent deserves nurturing fulltime...God bless,
shyComment Written 20-Jun-2007 by shy1250The
Secrets Of the Stars
Excellent
Very lovely. very lovely rhythm and flow here.
Beautifully done, simple and compact, sweet,tender and vibrant. Enchanting. Thank you for preesenting this poem up for review.
Good luck in your writing and your art, which is enthralling!!
Comment
Written 08-Jun-2007 by weirdcarbon
The Laughter Of the
stars Excellent
Now that is quite an image you have spun
there with very few words. Very well done When I read this I feel at peace and rather childlike - it creates serenity if that's
possible Nicley done - no SPAGs or typos Michael
A new World
Excellent
Hey journeytoforever
A lovely mysterious poem. But I would say that,
loving all things mythical and Faerie-like. There
is a haunting quality to this,
in my opinion. The picture of the child, when read with the poem
seems to portray a sense of destiny!
Does that make sense?
I loved the start of this,
"He lived in a world
No one else could see
A
world within a world
In a faraway fantasy."
This
sets up the tone for the rest of your poem, and gives me so many great images. So when
you
took us across "boundaries of space and time," it was inevitable, but surprising on the first
read.
Some people might mistake this for a religious poem (I'll
be red-faced if it is! LOL)
but it is beautiful and magical to read.
Excellent
Eagle Eye
Comment
Written 15-Jun-2007 by Eagle Eye Jerry
Ancient
myth
Excellent
Hi JourneyToForever.
This is really deep.
first of all, I love the picture.
second, the theme of this poem is brilliant. A reverse take on mythology. Damn! I wish I had
thought of that!
You might want to change the spelling of "thier"
to "their" that's unless it's intentional. I tend to
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the finer points of poetry.
Thanks for this poem, I really enjoyed it.
Eagle Eye.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2007 by Eagle Eye Jerry
A star in the sky
Excellent
jtf, the artwork in this piece is wonder filled. Frankly, if this is typical of the artist's work,
abundance and fame is surely within grasp. The poem evoked images of fireflies, or as we called
them in Maryland, "lightening bugs." This reader sees a correlation between heaven's stars and
lightening bugs; each shine in the dark, enabled by the hand of God. D.
That
section was beautiful. I really think the imagery you included was what really tied this poem
together.
I hope your children's book turns out amazing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2007
by Rosalita21
it seemed I touched a tendril in myself that swung and grew
through the poem...it felt as if the poem carried me on this tendril...and it visited tender, comprehensive, and cohesive
in powerful ways...intriquing and imaginative...echoes of child like sweetness
by
authorauthor
poem,
you really create a lot of emotion in this work, in a very economical and poetic way...I really loved it and the picture is
great too, as the years...those eyes.
and i used one of your art works for my novel,
which i have disabled from the site as it is being looked at by several publishers...in America and you...he heheh
which flowed effortlessly from start to finish...thank you for sharing your poetic art with me, it
is a work I would recommend to other readers for by rivki1111
Is
this for me
Excellent
This is a very beautiful piece.
You are quite the artist in both your visual presentation and your
poem. Very impressive. I enjoyed
this presentation totally!
Sally
Comment
Written 30-Mar-2007 by sallysaucer
The
Poetry of Time
Excellent
Beautiful! Both the art and the
poem. This poem describes the way I often feel when I come up
with a poem. "His heart
reaches out
His mind and soul unite
His
words take on a life of their own ( written "there own", but I believe "their "is correct)
Good luck with your book, I am sure that it will be inspiring!
